Tiana Smith

I enjoyed the general arc of the story line, though there were some parts that seemed a little overly educational on the benefits of healthy eating ... but that might just be because I've been feeling very unhealthy lately and guilty ...The parts with Nick had me a little frustrated, mainly because I just felt like she had no self control, even though she obviously did to be changing her life the way she was. Also, it seemed like there were some grammatical tense changes. Aside from that, I really liked the fact that there was a smart, normal girl as the heroine and that she wasn't drop dead gorgeous but she was still noteworthy. I liked that the lead guy wasn't perfect and the action was all very believable.